Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Shooting Star

She was short of breath as it was unbearable, irrational, insanity towards the current situation. Idiotic more than anything, really. Such a strange scent had managed to give her emotional unstability. A black suit, made out of the best of all the best material one could ever ask for. It was hanging on him, in a perfect manner that is. She was mesmerized more than anything. It was like a gentle hypnosis to her. This has been happening to her every morning, starts around the hour of eight in the morning. If only he knew, knew about how he fascinates her. She was just a clerk, in other words nothing when compared to him as he was the leader, the boss. He gets all her attention from the point that he sets his foot out of the car. His black leather shoes shining, reflecting the sunlight. She tries her best to impress him by wearing lovely makeup at just the right amount to make her stand out from the crowd. Sometimes, she makes him great morning coffee. All the while, her effort was left unnoticed till one day, she tripped in front of him. All the perfection turned into a big misunderstanding, in which we may call an embarassing moment. The other workers were laughing their socks off but he, the goddess gave her his hand and pulled her up. From that day on, he started talking to her, realising her beauty and not forgetting her personality that serves up to perfection everytime. They were drowning in love and compassion. Her wish came true. It was a wish that was made when a star shot off from the sky. He had been her one and only wish since she first laid her green eyes on him. The impossible evolved into reality.




Not based on a true story, just my random imagination.




Written by,
Juria Hartmans

4 comments:

  1. juria,

    im sorry if my post about u create prombel

    i didnt know who is "the person who discovered her and gave her her first proper modelling job"

    sorry if i did something wrong

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  2. This one's my favorite of yours so far. Partly because the descriptions are great, but that's a trait of all your stories. The main reason is the way the whole thing paints the scene in your mind. The things that are mentioned and alluded to all add up until you can almost close your eyes and end up right there. Mood, atmosphere, emotions, it's all laid out here and it's awesome. Great job, Juria.

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  3. I was smiling the whole way through! XD The way you describe being in love..is so (if i might put it this way) hopefully romantic that I can't help but feel warm and fuzzy... this is Aaron San

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  4. eh, wrong one sorry...please extract comment form here and throw it to the Nate one

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